2009年4月13日 星期一

Journal #12

Allen
First draft-Argument essay
04/13/09
Are cell phones dangerous?
In our life cell phones always like our privy stuff. We need it every time and every where. Cell phones sounds like very good but it still has some disadvantage. I classify them in three different ways.
At first, cell phones will damage our health. For example, if the single is very strong and when you sleep you put the cell phone next to you every day and so on. Maybe you will have cancer, but at the other way if you’re a business man/woman is convenient to communicate with other people or your parent have some emergency to tell you they won’t worry about that they cannot find you.
Then sometimes it will have traffic when you used it. I remembered last semester there was a huge earthquake in California. After the earthquake I want to call my brother but was on traffic because lots of people are using the cell phones. In some case we have to bring the cell phone. When you go hiking you must bring it event there’s no single. In my country if the place don’t have any single and when you have any emergency, you just need to call 110 then you can talk with the police. But the most important thing is you need to have battery.
Lastly, right now internet is very convenient you can download anything you want. In my cell phone I have a lot of games. When I was in high school, I always play games during the class. But if you want to contact with other you should have a cell phone. If you like some girl you can lend her your cell phone, maybe after she will become your girlfriend.
All in all, the world is changing we don’t use the letter anymore. The best thing to communicate or contact with the people is cell phone. But do not use it too over, because it still has a lot of disadvantage.